Tuesday, January 26, 2016

The Friend Part-2

A shock went through my spine. He was my best buddy, and now I was feeling scared of him. I was so dumbstruck at that moment that I couldn't even react. I just sat there shocked and in disbelief. He continued to talk...

My friend: "I killed her and I don't feel one bit of regret regarding that. She deserved that"

Me: "Dude you're joking??? How could some one kill his own wife?? Man what were you thinking?? You've gone mad or what? "

My friend: "Anybody in my place would've thought about doing the same thing. After I moved to US, she had started seeing other guys."

Me: "Dude you could've taken a divorce or something. Why the hell did you have to take such an extreme step?"

My friend: "I did what I thought was justice. She needed that. You marry someone with trust in your mind. All I asked for was to have a family and kids and to lead a normal life."

With every passing moment, my heart beat was rising faster. The man, the killer, my best friend was scaring the shit out of me. And my body wasn't even moving. I was just stuck to the chair.

My friend: "You know I had smelt something fishy when I came back home after 18 months in US. She was behaving weirdly."

Me: "Ya... You were telling that before.."

My friend: "Before going to US I told my sister to keep a watch on her and that I feel something is wrong. And as I thought my doubts were right. She was seeing three guys at the same time."

My eyes were getting red. The fear has surely crept into my whole body. The cold weather wasn't helping things.

My friend: "One of the guys was her colleague in office. One Mr Vinod Khosla. He was a casanova sort of a person and getting married ladies into his trap was kinda like his hobby. I smashed his head with his own laptop and stabbed his eye with the laptop battery."

Ohh my godd!!!! This guy has become a maniac. I have to call the cops now. But how..... I don't even have guts to get up from the chair. My hands were frozen and I just couldn't make an attempt to reach my mobile phone. And he was sitting there, as cool as a cucumber after murdering these people as if he was doing some social service..I stuttered and I asked him,

Me: "Wh.. Wh.. What about the other two guys??"

My friend: "Another guy I found out was our neighbour. He was this call centre cool hip hop sorta guy and he was having a nice time fooling around with my wife."

Me: "What did you do to him??"

My friend: "I shot him..That too in front of my wife before I shot her.."

Me: "And and, the third guy?"

My friend: "You know, my sister couldn't find details about the third guy. So before shooting my wife I directly asked her. You know whose name she took?"

With a sudden movement, I jumped from my chair and tried to reach the beer bottle. But he was quick. He overpowered me and took a gun from his coat and pointed it right between my eyes...

My friend: "She took your name... Yoursss... And you called yourself my best buddy huh?? This was your business trip huh???"

Me: "Please man, please please, don't kill me man please!!!!"

He wore this sarcastic smile and said
My friend: "Don't worry, I won't kill you. You don't deserve a quick death by a gun shot. I never told you how my kid died. Apparently Mr Vinod was a frequent visitor to Thailand's prostitutes. And he got HIV from them which he gave to my wife as a present. My Kid died of AIDS man... And I know that bloody virus is killing you too second by second, destroying your body organ by organ"

He pointed the gun towards his head and said "Enjoy your death man. See you in hell".........

12 comments:

Bibu Varghese said...
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Bibu Varghese said...

On November 13, 2009 5:18 AM Bibu said
"Shoot me !!!
I think this is goin to end like an 'RGV' movie. I can see why the wife was shot! Or is it that the author wants me to see it that way :P
An element of deception waiting to happen, a big TWIST on the lines of Usual Suspects. Sorry readers!" :P

I don't like saying- "I told u so! " :P
The protagonist- narrator being the culprit-->Deception-->Twist-->Revenge
Maybe I read the story teller's mind too well! :D:D:D

Malita said...

Twisted story !!!

MD said...

Move over Ramsay Brothers, You have a competitor. BTW, is this the last part, or are there more twists in the series???

Dreamer said...

shaaaaaaaa kya yaar ...i thot it wud be more murderous....more daravna....n more blood shed.........hehe ...nyways aur ek khonkhar kahani lik dena :) :)

Sachin said...

hahaha .. Kahani main twist ... I liked thw ending ....

Unknown said...

Great man.....can't imagine you can write such stories also.....end was nice.. :)

Unknown said...

well i was looking forward to the rest of the story as i felt the first part to be pretty interesting..but dude, the 2nd half was jus too predictable :0....
come up with something more imaginative...Kuch aur acha ending socho :)

Varun said...

Although the story looks to be inspired from RGV movies, I liked it..

Anonymous said...

He pointed the gun towards his head and said "Enjoy your death man. See you in hell".........He shooted him self...

Me:I have given a sarcastic smile and whispered him "I always do protected sex..." Enjoy ur death.

Morel of da store: Think before u act..

Vipin TV said...

Being associated with you for a long time, I had predicted the second half of the story... Come on Varun!!! You have the imagination that could have made the ending a bit more twisted...

Jaganmohan Ponmani said...

Finally he is your good friend and you are the culprit...! Careful about friends...! :)